BLACK SMOKE
Submitted by Tara Fox Hall
Northeast U.S.
My mother Chris loves to retell this story in our family. I
would think it was fiction, if I hadn’t been there the night it happened.
Chris had been in her early thirties, sure of herself, one
divorce already under her belt. The apartment had been a godsend: cheap, easy
to heat, and no yard to mow. There were no stairs, unlike the apartment above
hers with a whole flight to transverse. The only drawback was that the laundry
room for both apartments was in the cellar.
She’d never liked the cellar. It was raw earth, one wall
just rubble and soil where the excavators had stopped working. There was one
bare bulb for light, its illumination never reaching the corners. Worst of all
was that against the far wall was a sub cellar with stone steps. Down there was
the worst, because the weak light didn’t reach that far. There was no
electricity. If you ventured down those steps, you had to have a flashlight.
That night she’d been folding laundry, cursing the landlord
and his refusal to buy a dryer. Idiot had said dryers shrunk sheets. She’d been
hurrying, tired from a long day at work. She had reached down to put the
laundry in the basket. When she’d looked up, against the wall in front of her
was the cast shadow of immense unfurling batwings.
Bat, she thought dumbly. It’s a big bat.
The wings continued to unfurl slowly.
She turned, and then stared with wide eyes. Dense black
smoke floated a foot off the ground, wafting slightly.
That was no bat!
Screaming at the top of her lungs, Chris had fled the
basement, locked the cellar door, run upstairs and locked her own front door.
She huddled at the kitchen table for a few minutes, trying to pull herself
together with the aid of a beer while her 8 year old daughter Tara played with
her horses on the kitchen table. Then she had gone upstairs to her neighbor’s
apartment and asked him to help her with a bat in the cellar.
Her gracious neighbor had come to the rescue, telling her to
stay upstairs while he got rid of the bat. He’d gone downstairs alone,
whistling, while she waited in fear upstairs, trying to decide what to do if he
didn’t come back.
However, the worst hadn’t happened. Her neighbor was back in
ten minutes. A thorough search of the cellar had revealed nothing out of place.
With a smile that managed not to be condescending, he’d assured her that if any
bat was still down there, she was safe, as he’d locked the cellar door.
It had taken Chris three days to work up the courage to get her
clothes. When she had finally ventured downstairs, it had been in the day, the
weak light streaming into the cellar through the two narrow dirty windows. The
minutes had seemed like hours as she slowly crossed the cracked cement floor,
her eyes on the sub cellar that remained in inky blackness. A sudden subtle
noise had come, as if some creature had shifted its weight, getting ready to
pounce. Stifling a scream, Chris had grabbed her laundry basket quickly, then
hauled ass upstairs.
She’d stayed there another few weeks, always making sure to
make trips to the cellar during the day. She’d never again seen whatever it had
been in the cellar that night, or heard any more noises. To her knowledge, no
one else who had lived there over the years had ever reported seeing anything,
including her cousin, who’d moved in when she’d left.
Her fear lingered over the unsolved mystery, haunting her
thoughts on dark nights. As the years passed, she’d theorized the black smoke
was a vampire or maybe a ghost. The place had been a bar long ago; maybe
someone had been murdered there, or murdered someone else.
Tara Fox Hall is an OSHA-certified safety and health inspector at a
metal fabrication shop in upstate New York. She received her bachelor’s
degree in mathematics with a double minor in chemistry and biology from
Binghamton University. Her writing credits include nonfiction short
stories, flash, short and novella-length horror stories, and
contemporary and historical paranormal romance. She also coauthored the
essay “The Allure of the Serial Killer,” published in Serial Killers -
Philosophy for Everyone: Being and Killing (Wiley-Blackwell, 2010). Her
first E-Book, Surrender to Me, was published in September 2011. Tara is
the author of the Promise Me vampire romance series and the Lash action
adventure series.She divides her free time unequally between writing
novels and short stories, chainsawing firewood, caring for stray
animals, sewing cat and dog beds for donation to animal shelters, target
practice, and contemplating—though not committing—murder for hire.
So pleased to have made it into your true ghost tales! Happy Halloween!
ReplyDeleteShiver… Fantastic story! That house (if it's still standing) is worthy of investigation! (I'd love to read it from the 8 year old's perspective, too…)
ReplyDeleteHugs,
Tori
If you ever make it to NY, Tor, I'll take you to the house. My cousin Courtney owns it now, and the cellar is still the same...CREEPY!
DeleteABSOLUTELY!!!!
DeleteHi,
ReplyDeleteThis is the person namedChris in the story, also Tara's mom. This really did happen to me , and I'd love to know what it was that I saw that evening.The shadow was a bat, but when I turned there was just a column of black smoke, not touching the ground. Glad to see there's a Fox in your name too.
Chris
Ooo, this is really freaky, Chris! I guess you'll always wonder what exactly it was and if it'll ever show up again. I don't imagine that would be easy to forget. So, no one else to this day has seen anything strange?
ReplyDeleteWow, amazingly scary. Daaamn. Love how stories spread so far, I'm in England reading this.
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